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"Writers always say, 'I always knew I wanted to be a writer; when I was a three-month-old foetus a pen formed in my hand and I began to scratch my first story on the inside of my mother's womb.' I started later, in my early twenties."
- Harlan Coben

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Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Marikana Memoirs

 
Image by LiveBlog Mail & Guardian edited by Naledi Sibisi
In August 2012, South Africa experienced what the French would refer to as Déjà vu, the illusion of remembering scenes and events when experienced for the first time: a feeling that one has seen or heard something before” (Merriam-Webster Dictionary, 2013:1). The Marikana massacre resulted in extensive coverage in both the local and global media arena. The following presents an analysis of the way in which storytelling strategies uncovered the event.

The Marikana Massacre, as it has been coined, is the conflict that occurred between The South African Police Service (SAPS) and South African miners who were striking for increased wages at the Lonmin Platinum Mine. The altercation resulted in supposedly the most brutal form of police violence recorded in South Africa since the Apartheid regime. Numerous local and international news networks documented the event as it proved to be crucial in affecting the nation’s reputation. International and acclaimed news network BBC News covered the story a day after the news broke. Both the article and footage included will allow for a joint analysis of the story.

The headline and lead immediately provide the information which answers the questions highlighted according to the 5 w’s and How model – alerting the audience as to who was involved, where and when the event occurred, what happened, how many were involved and why this took place. The hard lead is therefore evidence of good journalistic writing as it is informative without having to read through the entire article to receive the necessary answers. One can now begin to analyze the strategic word choices presented in the article.

According to the lead, an unspecified police chief is quoted which evokes the readers curiosity as it suggests that an inside source is being quoted. The specified number of people allows for an emotional reaction from the audience as it does not state whether the deceased are in fact the miners or the police officers – another way in which suspense is built and the audience member is enticed to read the remainder of the article. The acknowledgment that the police were the ones who “opened fire” suggests that they are the perpetrators by use of framing which can pattern the opinion of the audience as one may be led to link this idea to Apartheid history by virtue of diction because of the way in which framing is designed to shape the opinion of the audience through the way the messages are constructed thus interpreted.

South African National Police Commissioner, Mangwashi Victoria ‘Riah’ Phiyega is later quoted, allowing the article to be objective as she represents the voice of the police force. It is interesting to note the role of the Police Commissioner and the relevance in quoting her.

"We have in the past few weeks witnessed a disappointing spectacle of police officers jeopardizing state security by placing information in the public domain, in contravention of their oath of office. This is unacceptable and cannot be tolerated if the fight against crime is to continue being effective."
- (All Africa, 2012:1).


The job of the commissioner is to address the above grievances therefore, by quoting Phiyega, bias could arguably be heightened because the voices of policemen who were at the scene are not heard. Moreover, the way in which the police are positioned as the wrongdoers through the lead, ridicules the above idea, placing the audience on the side of the miners. The article then documents the string of events in chronological order, providing factual information and background as well as reports from witnesses and an employee who can validate the claims and challenge those made by Phiyega, who made prior claims that the police acted in self-defense. This structure of writing can be seen in the inverted pyramid model – reinforcing the idea that this is a hard news piece.

The story further includes numerical figures that contextualize the amount which the strikers were demanding regarding increased wages. Due to the fact that this is an international report, the figures are translated into dollars thus allowing for priming to occur as it places authorities in a negative light and ultimately tarnishes South Africa’s reputation by implying that the cost was minor because of the emphasis placed on Lonmin being amoung one of the top platinum producers in a global context.

The underlying reference to Apartheid history and mass killing at the hands of the police force is constantly supported by factual information in succeeding paragraphs, disclosing the number of deaths and injuries as well as presenting the miners’ account. This demonstrates well-balanced, journalistic writing. Moreover, visual footage is included, showing a video of Phiyega explaining the ordeal and confirming the claims made in the article. This shall be used as the second source for analysis.
The video is not supported by any additional commentary by the news network, allowing the audience to formulate an independent opinion thus making the footage free of priming – which would in some sense manipulate the audience into the way in which they should receive the information. 
The source however, presents only the opinion of the police force thus showing only one side of the story. By virtue of agenda setting, one can argue that BBC News deliberately excluded commentary on the footage in order to provoke an emotional reaction from audience members. The idea that only one voice is heard may lead the audience to question the validity of these claims. Additionally, the lack of texual frames enhances the negative light the police force is seen in. Interestingly, the physical placement of the footage on the page could also be considered strategic in the sense that it appears directly next to the quotations of the experience of miners on that fateful day. This allows the audience to make a comparison between the two and reiterates the idea that the police are being viewed in a negative light. The absence of the miner’s voices is questionable and challenges the Phiyega’s credibility. Essentially, with the police force and their commissioner being portrayed in this manner, the leader of the nation comes into question without having been mentioned. One can see a similar method of reporting in the following cartoon.

From a local perspective, an analysis of a visual text by leading South African cartoonist, Zapiro, can be carried out.
© 2012 Zapiro (All Rights Reserved) Printed/Used with permission from www.zapiro.com
No difference between Lonmin tragedy of 2012, the Sharpeville tragedy of 1960 and the Sowetan riots of 1976 published in Sunday Times on 19 Aug 2012
The above cartoon is a powerful method of reporting because of its satirical nature.

“Satire is both an “oblique” – or indirect way of suggesting the need for social change, and a “baser” method of personal attack”
-       (Kaplan, 2008:124)

For the above reason, one can argue that through use of humour and sarcastic undertones, Zapiro is directly debasing the current government and the police force by comparing the Marikana incident to the Apartheid regime pre-democratic elections. Because it is a visual piece, textual references are minimal thus the focus is placed on what is not being said, enticing the audience to ask questions and conduct further research on the story. According to news values, what constitutes news would be the idea that it is dramatic, involves conflict, it is factual and relevant. The above cartoon was published during the weekend succeeding the event. Moreover, it is factual in capturing the dates when similar historic events happened in South Africa, thus supporting previously insinuated ideas about the South African Police Force in the BBC article by use of agenda setting and framing – the way in which the media present stories or events to the public strategically via placement and frequency of coverage (Bull, 2010:168). The audience then prioritizes the importance of the story because of the way the media covers it. In this case, the continual references to Apartheid history may evoke concern and an fear by reminding the audience to date back to thirty years ago.

As seen above, there were similarities in reporting styles in both a local and global context, particularly in the way in which the audience was swayed towards the side of the miners and against the police force through both verbal and visual storytelling strategies.

http://bit.ly/LwdkG5 (All Africa)
http://bit.ly/10uEpNn (Zapiro Cartoon



 

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